First paragraphs

****Background story.  We are working on various forms of recognizing grammar such as parts of speech, etc.  We are also learning about paragraphs.  I found this book at a Used book store and fell in love with it.  This is his first paragraph attempt from it.  Basically you are given questions and answer each one to create a paragraph.



Yow own an amusement park.....

What kind of park is it?  My amusement park will be large and will have roller coasters, water rides, and wild animals to see.  It is called Wild Water Safari Roller Coaster Park.

How much does it cost to enter?  It has to have a fair price.  I will ask $20.00 per person to visit my park.

What hours is the park open?  During the week, we will open at lunchtime and close at dark.  On Saturday and Sunday, we will be open from early morning until it is dark.

What is the best ride?  The best ride will be the Raptor Race which is a water roller coaster.  You will go up high and your car will drop into a big pool of water that is shaped like a dinosaur's mouth.

What is the best game to play?  There will be big prizes at alley ball and ring toss.

What is the best prize that someone can win?  The best prize will be to win a ride on a zebra in the Wild Animal park.  They can also win big stuffed animals and funnel cakes.

What is your job at the amusement park?  I will be the manager and tour guide for the park.

     My amusement park will be large and will have roller coasters, water rides, and wild animals to see.  It is called Wild Water Safari Roller Coaster Park.  It has to have a fair price.  I will ask $20.00 per person to visit my park, and they need to bring food like carrots and crackers for the wild animals to snack on.  That's how we will keep the price low.  During the week, we will open at lunchtime and close at dark.  On Saturday and Sunday, we will be open from early morning until it is dark. The best ride will be the Raptor Race which is a water roller coaster.  You will go up high and your car will drop into a big pool of water that is shaped like a dinosaur's mouth.  There will be big prizes at alley ball and ring toss. The best prize will be to win a ride on a zebra in the Wild Animal park.  They can also win big stuffed animals and french fries.  I will be the manager and tour guide for the park.